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08-16-2008, 01:43 PM

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Homemade Animation: Weird Clown

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I'm an amateur animator and use stopmotion technique to make funny and shorts clips.

My latest stopmotion animation is about a clown.There's something weird about him.
I wont tell you what, just watch and find out!

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=OvLayr1bpo4 (1:24)

Comments are welcome!

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08-16-2008, 06:55 PM	#2
*Juan.©amaney* Groin Grabbingly Good Join Date: Jan 2003 Location: North Mexico . . . Penis Size: Python Posts: 17,619/8.09 Threads: 512 Friends Network	Re: Homemade Animation: Weird Clown dude this is borderline spam...and im too lazy to watc hthat...someone tell me if its spam or not
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08-16-2008, 07:36 PM

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Re: Homemade Animation: Weird Clown

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Originally Posted by Juan.©amaney

dude this is borderline spam...and im too lazy to watc hthat...someone tell me if its spam or not

Not spam per say, just promotional to get people to view his video. I don't think youtube does pay per click like some video sites do.

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08-16-2008, 08:06 PM

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Re: Homemade Animation: Weird Clown

From GroeneG's YouTube Channel:

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Originally Posted by yason

My main thing is all about building strong story lines and characters that have spunk.

You need to work on your comedic 'timing.' If you want use to care about the 'surprise' you have to first make us care about the clown. The transformation as you show it lacks context.

i.e., Perhaps you begin with the clown doing some juggling or magic tricks, which seem to be skillful (since we assume he's human). Then, he goes into his dressing room and removes the makeup (at a much faster pace), revealing the 'surprise.'

Keep trying!

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08-17-2008, 12:57 PM	#5
yason whore Join Date: Aug 2008 Location: Inquitomep Posts: 2/0.01 Threads: 1 Friends Network	Re: Homemade Animation: Weird Clown @shiiboi: Thx for the critics. I think you are right. It works a bit the 'surprise' but good be stronger I'll agree. It took me some 30 hours to make this. You can imagine how long it would take to add what you suggest. So I made the choice to don't show the clown performing but only hear the reaction of his audience. Peace!

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